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Tell me this, what happens when
You hear a song
And you get this voice of sympathy
Who can be your greatest enemy

Like so in reality
these enemies..
Can't see their good qualities

But you feel like you must
To take a chance
And Give them the light
A feeling of sympathy comes

This mask of sympathy makes you ache
You can't do anything
But just sit there and wait
For that apology

Oh Listen. Listen for that sympathy.
Can you hear that apology?
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Meh. I think I'm going to sumbit this is my school Underground INK magazine. Poetry helps me, I thought I'd give it a shot again. Really, if you read it, I'm grateful. Poetry in general doesn't get noticed enough, or atleast I think.

Poem by *Dancing-Queen-Yuki

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:iconpoofypajamapants:
I read it XD!!

Hey, it helps to start small, to get people's attention, then hit them with larger stuff. They'll remember how good the smaller poems where, so they'll read the longer ones as well, expecting that kind of satisfaction.

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:icondancing-queen-yuki:
Thank you. Yeah.. I don't really like writing long poems or stories, unless if its a short story, I try to keep them short. >: I don't know if I'll write any thing else like this or not.

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:iconpoofypajamapants:
*shrug* You're choice. It might give you something to do when you're not drawing.

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:icondancing-queen-yuki:
Usually its what I do when I'm not drawing. XD That or stare off in to space. :B

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:iconpoofypajamapants:
Hmm...space.

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:icondancing-queen-yuki:
I think you're from outerspace. )8

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:iconpoofypajamapants:
I think I am too. From an advance civilization.

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:iconsaruke:
Great poem yuki. you should write more, I'm sure the rest 'll be just as great ^^

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:iconknuxie-2005:
really good... I love poems! went to live poetry on wednesday ... anyway, I'd love to see more (:

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